I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
kia Ora Blake I think you have a post about swimming sports and good work on coming second did you come any other places? did you get into another race? bye Arli.
Kia Ora Blake this is Arli from Grey main school mamaku 1 I think you did a great post about swimming sports we also do swimming sports and I got into the next level I am the best back stroke swimmer in my age level in grey mouth were you nervous ? by.
Hi Blake, It's Mikaela from St. Bernadette's School. I liked how you had a photo of the swimming pool because it created a picture in my head. Maybe next time you could go back and edit some mistakes. Where did you go swimming ?
Hi Blake I thought your post was really cool. Who bet you? Do you love to swim? At our School we have a inside swimming pool. Carey Year 6 Drummond Primary School
Kia Ora Blake Ra this is Arli from Grey Main school you did an awesome blog post on swimming sports we also do this each year how many races did you do? do get into another race if you come 1st 2nd or 3rd? what type of stroke did you do? by Arli
Kia Ora Blake My name is Honor I am a year 5 student from greymain shcool in greymouth. I really like your post on swimming but maybe next tim. you could put more information on who came first? and where did you do it? Did you do it at your shcool or at a town pool. We did swimming sports in term 1 and I had to do it in heats. I am not sure what I came. Noho Ora Mai (from) Honor.
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kia Ora Blake I think you have a post about swimming sports and good work on coming second did you come any other places? did you get into another race? bye Arli.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Blake this is Arli from Grey main school mamaku 1 I think you did a great post about swimming sports we also do swimming sports and I got into the next level I am the best back stroke swimmer in my age level in grey mouth were you nervous ? by.
ReplyDeleteHi Blake,
ReplyDeleteIt's Mikaela from St. Bernadette's School. I liked how you had a photo of the swimming pool because it created a picture in my head. Maybe next time you could go back and edit some mistakes. Where did you go swimming ?
Hi Blake
ReplyDeleteI thought your post was really cool.
Who bet you? Do you love to swim? At our School we have a inside swimming pool.
Carey
Year 6
Drummond Primary School
Kia Ora Blake Ra this is Arli from Grey Main school you did an awesome blog post on swimming sports we also do this each year
ReplyDeletehow many races did you do?
do get into another race if you come 1st 2nd or 3rd?
what type of stroke did you do?
by Arli
Kia Ora Blake, I really like your swimming blog post. Next time you can put more information into it like you should put in your friends places.
ReplyDeleteI remember when I did swimming and I came 3rd place. I was so happy but I was so tired. What place did you think you were going to get?
By Blake from Grey Main School
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Kia Ora Blake My name is Honor I am a year 5 student from greymain shcool in greymouth. I really like your post on swimming but maybe next tim. you could put more information on who came first? and where did you do it? Did you do it at your shcool or at a town pool. We did swimming sports in term 1 and I had to do it in heats. I am not sure what I came. Noho Ora Mai (from) Honor.
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ReplyDeleteHi Blake
I like your swimming story It is cool. My name is blake too is it cool,to swim with your friend.
Hi Blake,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story about swimming sports did you win your race? Was the pool cold or not? our one is at are school. Do you like swimming? I do.
Flynn
Room4
Drummond School