I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Blake, It's Mikaela from St. Bernadette's School. I liked how you had a photo of the swimming pool because it created a picture in my head. Maybe next time you could go back and edit some mistakes. Where did you go swimming ?
Hi Blake I thought your post was really cool. Who bet you? Do you love to swim? At our School we have a inside swimming pool. Carey Year 6 Drummond Primary School
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Hi Blake,
ReplyDeleteIt's Mikaela from St. Bernadette's School. I liked how you had a photo of the swimming pool because it created a picture in my head. Maybe next time you could go back and edit some mistakes. Where did you go swimming ?
Hi Blake
ReplyDeleteI thought your post was really cool.
Who bet you? Do you love to swim? At our School we have a inside swimming pool.
Carey
Year 6
Drummond Primary School
ReplyDeleteHi Blake
I like your swimming story It is cool. My name is blake too is it cool,to swim with your friend.
Hi Blake,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story about swimming sports did you win your race? Was the pool cold or not? our one is at are school. Do you like swimming? I do.
Flynn
Room4
Drummond School