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Wednesday 3 August 2016

Quick as a Cheetah
Slow as a slof
Large as a dinosaur
Happy as a Twet
Nice as a rino
Hot as a swete lized
Strong as a grela
Image result for white jaguarsLoud as a lien
Tough as a jagwa
Brave as a ladybug
Wild as a tiger
Lazy as a girl
Busy as a pig
Put it all together and you’ve got (Blake ra)!

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  1. Allan Robertson5 August 2016 at 11:06

    How wonderful to be quick as a cheetah. I don't often see pigs being busy but I will believe you. I really like the comparisons you have made. Are they metaphors or similes?

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Unknown19 August 2016 at 10:53

    Hi there, my name is Adam and I am a student in Room 5 at Awhono School. I really like how have got lots of things in your poem. It made me think of a good friend. Have you thought about doing some art?

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