I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
There is some great reading happening here and it sounds like an exciting play. Do you think it would be good to have an introduction for the listener that explains who the characters are and what the setting is? Well done for including this on your blog.
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There is some great reading happening here and it sounds like an exciting play. Do you think it would be good to have an introduction for the listener that explains who the characters are and what the setting is? Well done for including this on your blog.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.